So far I have received two nice comments on my short story, “The Slightest of Indiscretions”, which was published earlier today at www.fictionontheweb.co.uk. Here they are:
Excellent writing brings this poignant story to life and makes the reader work to understand more of what might be. Very many thanks for a satisfying, emotionally intelligent read,
Nancy Lane April 19, 2016 at 3:45 PM
The back and forth in Quinn’s mind makes it an excellent read. Thank you, Phil.